Sorry Dear………..
Sometimes I don’t hear
Your heart’s desire
Though i...
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Sorry Dear………..
Sometimes I don’t hear
Your heart’s desire
Though it speaks loud and clear
Files that pile on my desktop
Mails landing and leaving my laptop
Local, Global politics and economics
Cloud my senses to your wish
Remember those days in our town
When we were not on our own
Far apart we were torn
Still our hearts had talked all alone
Standing far off in crowded places
We ever talked through our faces
I knew every word your eyes told
You knew all the thoughts in my mind’s fold..
Flowered skirt and the colored shirt
Long plaited hair flowering white
Lovely eyes atop a silver smile
I ate, drank and breathed on your prized sight
Today I have you close by my side
Forever in my life’s fight
Unable to cherish you day or night
Running after a distant twilight
Job, Money, Property and prosperity
Kids, Colleagues, Friends and Relatives
Submerged totally in worldly chores
Lost in this din is our talking soul!
-TBT
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Dear LRao,
Thanx for ur comments and request. I will definitely heed your wishes.
Dear Womanslove
Thanx for ur comments and compliments
-TBT
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well said and nicely written one TBT
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TBT -- I think the talking soul is heard; otherwise the poem wouldn't have happened. this expression/acknowledgment of the situation would not have happened. right? so.... since it is heard, then do write a sequel on how to honor this talk, how one would re-connect heart to heart and soul to soul.... not to end with despair but with renewed hope of regaining that togetherness, getting back to the basics. and not letting the din get to you completely. Looking forward to the sequel....
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Dear Meera,
Thanx for ur comments and consolation.
Dear Cindrella King,
thanx for ur comments, compliments and wishes.
Dear DMR
Thanx
-TBT
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Hi BTB,
Deep insight feelings reflected in your words..You had time to let out your feelings...Hope you will make up to spend some time with your loved one...
Its really a great feeling in the world when somebody says that they miss us..we feel more happy when we hear the same from the people close to our heart...Expressive poem...
Cindrella King
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Today I have you close by my side
Forever in my life’s fight
Unable to cherish you day or night
Running after a distant twilight
Job, Money, Property and prosperity
Kids, Colleagues, Friends and Relatives
Submerged totally in worldly chores
Lost in this din is our talking soul!
deserves a 5 sad faces...
Meera
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