Tsuna-me

Dec 25 2006  | Views 882 |  Comments  (19)
A story written by my daughter, in her words, in her style..... Expand

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  Red Strawberry posted 2 yrs ago

very heart felt....kudos to ur lil one for expressing her feelings so vividly in words
 
cheers



  mayaonline posted 2 yrs ago


Hey TBT, do tell her it was really cute.....



  sumit satsangi posted 2 yrs ago

You know... its a heart touching story... your kid actually writes a nice story... wishing a nice career for your kid... keep it up...



  Nargis Natarajan posted 2 yrs ago

Yes TBT, show her the comments......that would be the biggest incentive to start seriously.
Maddss:  



  maddss123 posted 2 yrs ago

TBT
 
Like father, like daughter, One day your daughter will be Nargis among writers and bloggers.
 
regards
 
maddss



  TheBigThinkg Blog posted 2 yrs ago

Dear Nargis,
 
True.. It is just a story.
 
When I wrote 'let down', I meant the last line in the story suddenly touched ur heart and left u hopeless. It is not about me.
 
But my in-laws and parent's did not like the ending, as she had blended fiction with reality and the ending jerked them. For them it is difficult to separate the two. I do not share that.
 
Currently, she is in holidaying mood at her grandparent's place. When she comes back, I will share all these comments with her.
 
-TBT



  Nargis Natarajan posted 2 yrs ago

Hey Come on TBT......Think BIG! Its just a story.....a figment of her imagination.....and a beautiful one at that!



  TheBigThinkg Blog posted 2 yrs ago

Dear sujim,
Thanx for ur comments and appreciation. I will carry this to her.
 
Dear VV,
Thanx for ur comments and appreciation.
 
I also felt let down in the last line. Probably this 'story' is just that expression of a child. I do not know if any real 'theme' is present.
 
There is no way I can argue with her. In fact both my in-laws and my parents did not like the ending she gave. But then it is a story.
 
-TBT



  varu ven posted 2 yrs ago

ippo paringa..........that last line..that very lastline ...theflower kept on the photo fell down  made me drop face down on the floor and sob sob!!!
ur daughter  am sure will become a bery bery good  writer  sum day.
V V
 



  sujim posted 2 yrs ago

Respected Tsuna-me
It is great work at the age of 12. I feel, she do not need publication but encouragement.
You may act uopn Madam Nargis's advice.
Best of luck to her.
Regards





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